But those who have delighted in James’s hilarious, brutal, and surprising series – Eton Crop is the sixteenth entry – should know that events are not guaranteed to go as planned and can often turn to nightmare for cops and criminals alike. What is fascinating here is that the obvious hook that would surely generate suspense for any other crime fiction writer – i.e., Will the undercover agent be discovered by the gang she infiltrates? – is subverted at the outset. Shale knows full well that Anstruther is a plant (his intel is just as good as Harpur’s) but stands to benefit from the charade, so he proceeds carefully.
With this excellent book, the author continues to add to a cumulative, serial narrative that gives characters a chance to speak, act, and reveal their personalities in fascinating and contradictory ways. “Panicking” Ralph Ember has survived much intermittent peril. Ralphy is a vain bar owner who has formed an uneasy alliance with the other local kingpin, Manse Shale, since both are threatened by the London forces trying to take over the drug trade in James’s always unnamed city. Art dealer and informant Jack Lamb provides Harpur, and only Harpur, with useful intel while wearing era-appropriate costumes whenever they have their midnight meetings at deserted WWII battlements. Even Ember and Shale’s junior partners in crime, Beau Derek and Alfie Ivis respectively, are wonderfully drawn creations, each with their own strengths, weaknesses, and rhythms of speech.
And as for Naomi, Bill James shows how adept, and how unique, he is at shaping characterization and psychological terrain. Over just two chapters (Ch. 4 and 5), the reader meets this woman and learns everything relevant about her through the character’s actions, words, and internal thoughts. In a way, it’s a minimalist portrait, as we follow her vacation with her boyfriend to Torremolinos, the friction that ensues while there from her commitment to go undercover – he rightly argues that, once undertaken, his relationship with “Naomi” will dissolve and “Angela Rivers” will be an unreachable stranger to him – and her only-live-once fling with a vacationing Welshman named Lyndon during the return flight to England. It’s a wonderful introduction, alternately letting us empathize and judge the young officer’s choices and her admirable but perhaps misplaced devotion to duty.