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Book Review: THE CROUCHING HILL (1941) by Winifred Blazey

7/12/2019

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PictureCover of the 2015 print-on-demand edition from Isha Books, India.
Of Winifred Blazey’s four published novels, 1941’s The Crouching Hill is the only one that is overtly structured as detective fiction. The book is dedicated to friend and companion Gladys Mitchell, “who supplied the setting for this book and suggested it should be written as a detective story.” And while the novel may provide all the elements of a traditional whodunit, including the discovery of a body, an investigator, multiple suspects, and a solution in the form of a confession, the sum total adds up to something more peculiar, off-key, and, unfortunately, ultimately disappointing.

I had high hopes for The Crouching Hill not only for its deliberate genre choice but also because the author’s two earlier efforts were compelling and rewarding reads.

Dora Beddoe (1936) was a marvelous first effort, a moody character study of a woman treated unfairly by life and family until she reaches a murderous breaking point. To me, 1938’s Indian Rain was even more impressive, an epic story of a man trying to make sense out of life and find peace in a world filled with misery and injustice. The Crouching Hill, in contrast, never focuses on a single character for which the reader can feel pathos or experience change. Many aspects, from continuously revolving characters being interviewed to the murder victim remaining a cipher through to the final pages, contribute to keep this mystery operating academically and artificially, but never truly organically.

The plot is a strange blend of sordid realism and Golden Age-era whodunit, with neither type landing satisfactorily. Schoolteacher Marion Francis is one of four staff members accompanying a group of girl students to the country, where the girls are to spend their holiday “billeted” with local villagers. After their charges have been paired with their host families, the teachers take rooms at the Rose and Thorn Inn, where Miss Francis and colleague Ursula French drink heavily and mix with the men in the pub. In the morning, Miss Francis is found “suffocated and strangled” in her bed; a post-mortem reveals that she was pregnant. The inspector immediately suspects her roommate Miss French (of the murder, that is), and those suspicions are heightened when a pair of local schoolboys claim to have interacted with the woman earlier that day, then disguised as a male motorcyclist.

While Blazey is quite good at crafting observations of social attitudes and human quirks, the tone of this book never quite settles. The details are too often squalid and grim – a pregnant woman’s death, a hasty tumble in the pub with a travelling salesman, a lecherous, rheumatic old man who relates his eavesdropping to the inspector with a leer and a wet-eyed wink – and the plotline (and certainly the story’s resolution) offers little joy or catharsis.

Taken as a novel of detection, well… It’s a litany of endless interviews, and there is no real fair play at work because the motive remains hypothetical until the killer steps forward to confess and explain. (There’s also an alibi reversal in the final chapter that feels like quite a cheat.) I get the feeling that, although she is using a familiar genre structure, Blazey isn’t interested in presenting a game to challenge the reader. The problem is that no larger theme is allowed to resonate, in part because no character is explored to a depth that makes us feel we understand him or her.

If her earlier, better books are an indication, I think the author is most interested in sending her fictional protagonists through a crucible, coming out either strengthened or defeated on the other side. In The Crouching Hill – even the title’s imagery of a landscape waiting to spring is referenced but never successfully activated in the story – Winifred Blazey’s true protagonist, the fated Marion Francis, is dead on the first page, her motivations and character a muted mystery, and no one, including the author, is quite able to bring her back to life.

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Paul Cleland
7/27/2019 03:42:06 pm

I recently finished Indian Rain, and I'm really surprised that it isn't a more well-known work. In my reading this book is unique. I have no doubt whatever that he story contains a great deal of authentic facts, blood-curdling as they are. The Couching Hill will be my next read. I'm old now, and every time a start a new book or find a new author, my first thought is that I hope I live long enough to finish it.

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Jason Half link
7/30/2019 07:30:08 pm

Hello Paul --- I completely agree about INDIAN RAIN. It was one of the most vivid and memorable books that I read in a long while. I think I had high hopes for THE CROUCHING HILL because of such a strong previous book, but I couldn't find anything that really resonated with me about the story or approach. I hope that you do read it -- and you will definitely finish it, mortal though we all are! -- and please let me know what you think of it. I wish Blazey were more celebrated, especially INDIAN RAIN.

Best wishes --- Jason H.

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